1. 体裁解读
日记常用来记述一天中所发生的重要的或有趣的事情,也可以用来叙述自己当天触景而发的感受等。日记的主要体裁通常是记叙文或简单的议论文。
2. 写作攻略
英文日记通常由书端和正文两部分组成。书端是专门记载写日记的日期及天气状况的。正文的格式与其他文章相近,一般缩进4个字母,也可以顶格写。由于日记所写的事件都是发生过的事情,所以日记通常用一般过去时。因为日记多为记叙自己的亲身经历或抒发自己的感想,所以一般用第一人称。
写日记的时候一般遵循以下步骤:
第一步:介绍事件:
第二步:具体阐述事情经过,补充细节;
第三步:表达感想或总结该事件的意义。
写日记要注意以下几点:
1. 日记的第一行要写清日期、星期和天气状况。日期和星期写在正文的左上角,月份与星期可以缩写。天气状况写在正文的右上角。如果是游记,还可以写明地点。
2. 日记通常使用过去时记录所发生的事件。若为议论、抒情或描述景物和人,为了生动,也可以使用一般现在时。
3. 日记的正文可以是叙事、描写、说明或议论等形式,且通常用第一人称。
4. 日记虽然是记录事件,但应该适当加一些个人感悟,写出亮点。
我们以【2018年四川成都市】为例:
假如你是图中女孩,你与家人于4月29日共度周日。请根据图中所示写一篇英文日记,讲述你当天所见和所做之事。
注意:1.日记应包含图中所有信息
2.日记中须写出当天的一些感受
3.日记应格式正确,语句通顺,句式多样
4词数:100左右。
参考词汇:城堡 castle螃蟹crab
【答案】Sunny Sunday,
April 29(th)
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.
写作模板
Day of the week Date Weather
Today is ___________. I did some meaningful things ___________.
In the morning, I ___________(事件一). In the afternoon, I ___________(事件二). After that, I ___________(事件三).
What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day! / Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because ___________.
【模板范文】
Sunday May 10th Fine
Today is Mother's Day. I did some meaningful things to show my love to my mother.
In the morning, I bought my mother some flowers with my pocket money. In the afternoon, I went shopping and then cooked a delicious dinner for my family. After that, I gave mother the card made by myself and said "Happy Mother's Day" to her. I told her I would study hard and never let her down. Hearing this, my mother was moved to tears.
What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!
亮点词汇搭配
1. 表示天气
fine adj. 晴朗的 cloudy adj. 多云的
snowy adj.下雪的 rainy adj. 下雨的
windy adj. 有风的 hail n. 冰雹
2. 抒发感想
moved adj. 感动的 enjoy oneself 玩得高兴
memorable adj. 值得纪念的 meaningful adj. 有意义的
worry about 担忧 delicious adj. 美味的
3. 其他
finish v. 完成 classmate n. 同学
voluntary adj. 志愿的,义务的 although conj. 虽然
经典句子背诵:
开头句
1. It was a fine/nice day. 天气晴朗。
2. Today is... 今天是……
3. I went to the park to... 我去公园……
4. We decided to go out for a picnic today.
我们决定今天出去野餐。
5. My classmates and I went to the park to do some voluntary work.
我和我们班的同学去公园做义务劳动。
中间句
1. First we were divided into three groups and then began working.
我们首先分成了三个组,然后开始工作。
2. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter and cleaning benches.
第二组的同学收集垃圾和清理长凳。
3. Group Three wiped all the equipment in the park.
第三组的同学擦洗公园里所有的设施。
结尾句
1. I had a good time today. / I enjoyed myself today.
我今天玩得很高兴。
2. I will never forget it. 我永远不会忘记这件事。
3. What a warm and meaningful day!
这是多么温馨而又富有意义的一天!
4. I will never forget the memorable day!
我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天!
5. Although everyone was very tired, we felt very happy because we had done a meaningful job.
虽然大家都很累,但我们很开心,因为我们做了一件有意义的工作。
(一)
【2018年浙江宁波市中考】今年5月11日,你校组织了一次社会实践活动,部分学生选择去了红星农场(见导图一),其余学生选择去了科技博物馆(见导图二)。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记,记录当天的经历和感受。
导图一 导图二
注意:(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点,并适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数:80 -100。日记格式及首句己给出,不计入总词数。
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip. ___
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文一】
Friday. May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.
The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!
(98 words)
【满分作文二】
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.
As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!
(99 words)
体即可。
(二)
【2018年湖北省孝感】本周一是端午节,你校外教Tony对中国文化很感兴趣,你陪他去槐荫公园观看了龙舟比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇日记。
写作要点:
1.现场情况。人多拥挤,16支龙舟队竞争激烈,人们欢呼,队员们闭队合作,最终“勇气队”获胜。
2.赛后活动:我给Tony介绍端午节,下午带他参加有关端午节的其它活动,如……
3.感想:Tony……,我……
写作要求:
1.短文内容必须包括所有要点、语句通顺,条理清晰;
2.省略号处须作适当发挥(1-2句即可);
3.100词左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
June 18th
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival. _____
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文】
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.
After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.
At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练、要点齐全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等词汇的恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密;本文还采用了丰富的句型,比如:运用了there be句型;定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句等复合句,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,这是一篇不错的范文。
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