考点65 书面表达电子邮件
高考频度：★★★★★
英文e－mail与英文书信的写法和格式大体相同，但也有不同之处。英文e－mail一般由以下五部分组成：
1．标题栏
这是英文书信中没有的。标题栏中有“收件人”、“抄送”和“主题”三个框。在“收件人”框中填写收件人的e－mail地址。如要将邮件同时发送给多人，可在“抄送”框中填入其他人的e－mail地址。在“主题”框中简要地概括邮件的内容，可以用一个单词，如：Greetings(问候)；也可以用短语，如：Personal information(个人情况)；还可以是一个内容完整但语言简短的句子。
2．称呼语
如果是同学或亲朋好友间的邮件，可以直呼其名，如：Mike；但如果是发给老师、长辈或上级，最好在称呼前加上称谓或职位。职位可用Doctor，Professor等，如：Professor Li。男性用Mr；女性用Miss(未婚)，Mrs(已婚)，Ms(不知婚否)。
3．正文
大多数e－mail篇幅短小，语言简单明了。如果是写给不熟悉的人，一般要先进行自我介绍；反之，则可直接进入正题。要多使用短句、简单句，少用或不用长句。一是便于阅读，再者使意思清楚。如果内容很长，可就重点部分作些介绍，而把详细内容以“附件”的方式发出。
4．结尾客套话
英文书信的信尾客套话常用Best wishes! Good luck to you! 等。而e－mail通常很简明，如：Best，Thanks，Yours等。
5．落款
直接写发件人的姓名即可，且与客套话对齐。
【写作佳句】
1．段首常用语：
(1)Thank you for your letter of Dec. 15th…
(2)I'm glad/pleased to tell you that…
(3)I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.
(4)Thanks for your invitation to the Christmas party.
(5)How are you getting along with your study?
2．话题引入常用语：
(1)I'm glad to tell you something about…
(2)As far as I know/am concerned/see
3．段尾常用语：
(1)Please write to me soon and tell me about your…
(2)I'm looking forward to your reply…
(3)With kind/ best regards/wishes.
(4)If so, please e－mail me in response…
【写作模板】
Dear_____ ,
I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that .(寒暄句加主题句)
(扩展句一)
(扩展句二)
(扩展句三)
I will greatly appreciate a response from your earliest convenience./I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(结束主体段落)
Best regards.(结束语)
Sincerely yours,
________
（1）
（2019年新课标全国卷II）假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【试题趋势】
今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。在短文的内容要求和要点设计上，难度与往年大致相当。另外，话题的选择体现了一个命题趋势：围绕人与社会的主题，加强德智体美劳的全面考查。通过排球比赛设定的体育情境体现了关注体育锻炼、倡导健康意识的理念。
纵观全国II卷英语书面表达，从题材上来讲，除了2014年考查了记叙文，十年中九年均考查了应用文，应用文占90%。所以考生在高考的英语写作的准备中应当把重心放在应用文上，熟练掌握英语应用文写作的几个相关专项，并且熟识高考英语基础词汇。
2009——2019年高考英语新课标卷II书面表达
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年份 |
命题形式 |
文体 |
内容 |
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2009 |
文字提纲 |
信件——回信 |
写信介绍改建后前门大街的情况 |
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2010 |
文字提纲 |
信件——去信 |
给笔友写信告知招聘广告信息 |
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2011 |
文字提纲 |
信件——祝贺信 |
写信向学校辅导中心求助 |
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2012 |
文字提纲 |
信件——申请信 |
申请参加国际中学生新加坡夏令营 |
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2013 |
文字提纲 |
信件——去信 |
请笔友代卖自己制作的中国结 |
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2014 |
文字提纲 |
短文 |
十年后的我 |
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2015 |
文字提纲 |
信件——邀请信 |
邀请外教一起去敬老院陪老人过重阳节 |
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2016 |
文字提纲 |
信件——邀请信 |
邀请英国朋友Peter参加摄影比赛并提供摄影作品 |
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2017 |
文字提纲 |
信件——邀请信 |
写信邀请外教参加剪纸展览 |
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2018 |
文字提纲 |
通知 |
通知观看英语短片 |
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2019 |
文字提纲 |
邮件——告知信 |
告知你的队友球队近期将参加比赛 |
今年的书面表达属于告知信，是考生比较熟悉的文体范畴。考生应紧扣所给各项要求展开写作。作为应用文写作的一个类型，告知信最为鲜明的特征是：简洁、准确。考生在写作时应根据自己对题目的理解，准确无误地表达重点信息，把告知信所涉及的事由、时间、地点以及事项交代清楚。本文需要简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项。在结尾处还需对队友表示期待和鼓励。
近年书面表达试题的开放性越来越强，只为考生提供一个笼统的写作提纲，要求考生围绕写作提纲进行适当的发挥，自主确定写作内容，体现出高考对考生创新能力的考查。总体来看，今年的书面表达充分体现了应用性的考查要求。另外，高考再次提醒我们，平时一定要重视对素材、词汇和句型等的积累，训练学生运用相关词汇和语法进行书面表达的能力。
【写作指导】
内容分析
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文体 |
告知信 |
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告知人 |
排球队队长 |
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告知对象 |
排球队队友 |
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告知主题 |
校排球队比赛 |
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告知内容 |
比赛信息； 赛前准备； 表达期待。 |
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问候语及开头语 |
I’m writing to you about ... / I’m writing to tell you something about ... |
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事件信息 |
事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物 （以本篇短文为例） 时间：on July 8th 地点：in the school gym 人物：our volleyball team and a team from Lingnan High School 事件的时间和地点的常用表达： There will be a match to be held in … The exhibition will be held in / take place in … The contest is organized by our school on … Our school will hold a music festival on … |
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个人发挥 |
适当增加相关细节 |
语言分析
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话题词汇激活 |
体育：volleyball, football, baseball, badminton, cycling, athlete, coach, competitor, gym, stadium, beat, defeat, compete, break / hold the record, goal, match, race, score, victory, win, player, team member 学校生活：after-school activities, take part in, attend, activity, participation, the students’ union （在平时的学习中要注意话题词汇的积累） |
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运用高级词块 |
如：take place, play against, get fully prepared, in addition, keep fit等 |
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运用高级句式 |
如：宾语从句，现在分词作状语等 |
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.
You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard together!
Cheers,
Li Hua
【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当，并运用了高级句式。I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.宾语从句；In order to win the match不定式作目
状语。文章语言流畅，上下文转换自然。
(2)
（2018年天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
（1）比赛的时间、地点；
（2）邀请他的原因；
（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【思路点拨】
本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
(3) （2017·新课标卷I）
（2017·新课标卷I）假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
（1）时间和地点；
（2）内容：学习唐诗；
（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【思路点拨】
随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：
1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史
2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；
3. 人称：第二人称为主；
4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。
5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【范文赏析】
Dear Leslie，
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua
Writing 1（2019年新课标全国卷III）
假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1.时间；
2.活动安排；
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing 2（2017·新课标卷II）
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.展览时间、地点；
2.展览内容。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing 3
（2017·新课标卷III）假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
1.球队活动；
2.报名方式及截止日期。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing 4（河南省2020届高三入学摸底考试）
假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Lessie即将来中国做交换生，来信请你给他推荐几个中文名字。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎并乐于推荐；
2. 介绍中文名字的特点；
3. 告知他查看邮箱附件中所建议的名字。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
邮箱附件E-mail attachment
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Writing 5（广西南宁二中、柳州高中2019-2020学年高三上学期联考）
学校外教Stacy暑假期间准备在本地开一家西餐小店，刊登广告为若干名高中生提供实践机会。下面是招聘启事：
4 middle school students are needed
Do service work and act as translator
Healthy and helpful
Contact: wfpub@gmail.com
假如你叫李华，愿意应聘。请写一封电子邮件，介绍自己的优势，并说明应聘的理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 书信格式已给出；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Stacy,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 6（百校联盟2019—2020学年高三TOP300尖子生联考）
假定你是李华。你们市要举行一年一度的国际风筝节，你的英国朋友Joe对中国的文化很感兴趣，因此 你想邀请他参加。请依据下列要点，给Joe写封电子邮件：
1. 风筝节的时间、地点；
2. 活动安排。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Writing 1
【参考范文】
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Writing 2
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—papercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
Writing 4
【范文】
Dear Lessie,
Hearing that you will come to China as an exchange student, I want to express a warm welcome to you. I’m very glad that you wish to have a Chinese name. There is no doubt that it will help you better fit in with the Chinese culture.
A Chinese name usually consists of two or three characters, which often contain some special meanings, expectations or blessings. However, unlike an English name, the family name of Chinese is usually put first and then a given name follows. In addition, I have come up with several Chinese names, which are added to the E-mail attachment.
I hope you will like one of them and have a good time in China.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 5
【范文】
Dear Stacy,
I happened to have read your advertisement and have decided to apply for the job. The following is my self-introduction.
As a high school student, having been learning English for many years, I have a good command of English. Warm-hearted and outgoing, I am always willing to help others. In addition, by taking exercise every day, I am in good condition. Therefore, I am firmly convinced that I am qualified for this job.
By acting as a translator for you, unpaid as it is, not only will it enrich my life, but also it will of great benefit to me in the long run. Apart from gaining the opportunity to practice my spoken English, I can accumulate some valuable job experience.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 6
【范文】
Dear Joe,
How is everything going with you? I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news that the International Kite Festival of this year will be held in the Central park in our city from next Saturday to Sunday. Knowing that you have an appetite for Chinese culture, I sincerely invite you to participate in it.
During the festival, you can enjoy many colorful and splendid shows by players from around the world. Besides, many experts will show people how to make kites and direct them to make their own kites. What’s more, a lot of pictures about kites will be shown during the festival, which I think will make you have a better knowledge of the history of kites.
Hoping to see you then. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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